This is only a goodbye
The remains of a fireplace
Burned 'till it's black
But eternal as amber
Unfortunately, our tears
Could not extinguish the flame
Eating you from the inside
Let me, my dear friend
Tell you how we'll miss you
Staring at every star in the night
Nothing will replace your joy
'Cause you'll be a million miles away
When you'll get this letter
You'll be a million miles away
You should be better













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i know that knowing someone who is dieing from cancer is hard not only for the person dieing but for her friends and family. She died last weekend.
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Riot be the rhyme of the unheard!
I also liked this passage;; "Burned 'till it's black - But eternal as amber"
Very touching. Sorry for the loss. It's short and sweet but there's somesort of "umph" missing to it, imo. Though I'm sure that's not at all what you're looking for.
Nonetheless, nice job.
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To love and be loved. Cared for and caring for.
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thanks
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Riot be the rhyme of the unheard!
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To love and be loved. Cared for and caring for.
{Friends don't let other friends do stupid things... alone}
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Riot be the rhyme of the unheard!
thanks too
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Riot be the rhyme of the unheard!
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